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PostSubject: The human who lives among the rabbits   Sat Dec 27, 2014 1:07 am

Name: Patrica Antoinette

Race: Human

Age: Biological? Nineteen. Mental? About Fifteen.

Gender: Female.

Physical Description: Pat's a pale girl; living in a cave does that to you. Some go as far as to call her 'deathly white', but she's not that pale, really. Okay she's damn near snow-white. But hell, when you're fifteen and haven't ever seen the sun in close to four years, you'd be pale too. Her hair is to the length of her chin. It's black. She stands five foot nine inches. Due to living in a town where the only real meal you can get is flowers, she's quite thin. She owns only one color of shirt (as to make shopping easy); grey. Black pants, for the most part. She takes comfort in wearing an old army coat with what looks to be Japanese kanji written on the sleeve under the insignia, a crossed sword and rifle. Clearly pre-war. She says she's had it forever; dunno how she got it; she doesn't look Asian. Hell, she looks more like she's from Canada. On formal occasions she has a suit with matching dress slacks ready.

Personality: For someone who's as pale as the moon and wears an old army coat, she's surprisingly cheerful. Don't get too close if you happen to be a Mimiga though. She's been known to grab- and snuggle- any and all Mimiga who decide to befriend her; tis why she lives in the town. She seems a little light-headed, but she's surprisingly good at making snap decisions and performs well under stress.

Personal History: Patrica, like other humans, wasn't born on the island; she was born on earth, where she lived an unremarkable life. Really, nothing special. When she was eleven, her dad decided to pack up and move to the island to perform research; he had little time for her, so he rented a place in Mimiga Village and left her there most of the time. Surface-brand Ramen was the meal she ate most days due to her father- a very dedicated man, when it came to his work- usually stayed working so late he fell asleep at the chemical table. She picked up the Mimigan diet at some point, as it was cheaper to eat the flowers than to constantly import Ramen. A low-calorie diet, but due to the magic that floated about in the island, the flowers were healthy enough to keep her alive. Her father resides in the blush-lands now, they don't see each other often. She still munches on flowers, but she has grown to enjoy the occasional stem of broccoli.

Weaponry: She has a pushdagger hidden in her coat. On formal occasions she carries a cane.

Magical Talents: Uh, she can do card tricks? None, to speak of.

Strengths and Weaknesses: For one; eating nothing but flowers has given her a lean body. She can weave and bob like nobody's business. On the other hand, her total stamina is rather low. Back down on earth she was a fast runner; eating nothing but plants and losing some weight as a result has made her faster. While she does have a pushdagger, other than grabbing you by the collar and repeatedly stabbing, she's not very well trained with it. While she was down on earth, she took an interest in archery. She's not very good at it, but she knows enough to sling an arrow downrange. She's mechanically minded, able to figure how most things work rather easily. By that same regard, while she's able to focus so hard on one thing she forgets everything around her, when she's not in that mode of 'This-Needs-Doing', she's easily distracted.

Other: If you have a Mimiga character, expect her to invite said Mimiga home. No, seriously. She'll let a Mimiga into her home even if he's a bugler. She'd probably give them her stuff too, if they snuggled with her.


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PostSubject: Re: The human who lives among the rabbits   Sat Dec 27, 2014 8:42 am

Overall, approval worthy! Just two bones.

One, the main one, is that Sue is a name from the games. Sorry, to avoid confusion we're gonna have to change that.
The second one is sort of dumb and doesn't require fixing, but. There's a surplus of ;s and -s. A few could be replaced by a comma or period, and a couple just omitted. If you find yourself using too many, just change the wording a bit!

Also, the -dashes- separating a prepositional phrase could be commas or parentheses.
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PostSubject: Re: The human who lives among the rabbits   Sat Dec 27, 2014 4:32 pm

Name fixed, writing not fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: The human who lives among the rabbits   Sat Dec 27, 2014 7:01 pm

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